snap crackle... drown

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Workshopped 6 months 1 week ago

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“I sat down eating a bowl the other day and this occurred to me”

— ScooterWerks

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I really like the idea; it's pretty funny. I think the text might be better "Ever think the sound of your cereal is it screaming for help as it drowns in your milk?" Also the text would be great with a different font and if it started on the top line very large and got smaller each successive line down.

Other than that, the drawing could use a little bit of sprucing up. It would be greatly improved with a bit of depth (i.e., shadows, highlights, textures, etc.)

by lucky760

| 6 months 1 week ago | CH

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i like it, but think the wording sounds a bit awkward.

by chloensampson | 6 months 1 week ago | CH

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I got interrupted and this was as far as I got, and since it was Friday I posted it up. I won't be able to work on this again till after Jury Duty... so updates are to come.

by ScooterWerks

| 6 months 1 week ago | CH

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I think it's greatly improved, particularly the bowl image. However I'd drop the "I have."

Have you tried a thicker font? I'm not sure, but wondering if it would be better that way or with the current font. Just a thought.

by lucky760

| 6 months ago | CH

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Excellent.

by lucky760

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when you guys print this on a tee make sure you keep the white space on the left side to keep the text centered.

by ScooterWerks

| 5 months 4 weeks ago | CH

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snap crackle... drown

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