Hip Raz

Workshopped 1 year 11 months 3 weeks ago

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13 votes

About this design by its creator…

“It's a cute Hippo giving a playful Raspberry. (Calvin and Hobbes style)”

— ScooterWerks

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Haha. I think that's really cute.

I think two things could improve it a bit: 1) Make the purple a bit darker and the tongue a bit redder; they seem sort of bland now. 2) add a little shadow and light to give it a less flat feel.

Oh, and one other thing. I'm not sure if "THBBT" is the best way to spell the raspberry sound. Perhaps "PFFFT" or something similar?

by lucky760

| 2 years 4 months 2 weeks ago | CH

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I most often associate "PFFFT" with a sound of dismissal.

by ScooterWerks

| 2 years 4 months 1 week ago | CH

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I think you're right about ^that. Still, there has to be some better way to spell the sound of a raspberry.

Very nice improvements so far!

by lucky760

| 2 years 4 months 1 week ago | CH

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I think PBBBT sounds closer. When you actually make the noise it sounds more like PB than TH. You could call the shirt Raspberry too...

by chloensampson | 2 years 4 months 1 week ago | CH

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I agree with ^chloe on both counts. PBBBT is more accurate and looks cuter/funnier. Also a title like "Hippo Raspberry" may help sell the point and the cuteness.

Even more, it'd be great to have a couple of raspberries in the picture as well...

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Here's a quick edit with a few changes I think might help: