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Health Care Plan? Don't Get Sick, or Die Quickly!

Designed by marinara

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Workshopped 6 months ago
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The font doesn't seem to fit, and maybe a little bit of size changing to heighten the punchline, (Make "But if you do" smaller, same with "(Before Bankruptcy)")

Also, the S on "Republican's" doesn't really need to be there.
by Shepppard  | 6 months ago | CH
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k i love feedback
by marinara  | 6 months ago | CH
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i tried but it aint perfect
by marinara  | 6 months ago | CH
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I think it's a very good first effort that could be improved with these couple of tweaks perhaps:
1) Drop the "s" from Republican
2) Increase the size and make the title "Republican Health Care Plan" split across two lines, two words to each line
3) Make "Don't get sick" larger
4) Shrink "but if you do, die quickly" small and put it in parens
5) Drop "before bankruptcy" or shrink it even more than the "die quickly" line

This'd make it pretty solid methinks. And very topical; I'm surprised we don't have many (or any) other health care designs!
by lucky760   | 6 months ago | CH
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