Serial Killer

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About this design by its creator…

“My take on an age-old pun. The idea came to me while having breakfast this morning. (Yes, I eat my cereal with a serrated-edged Rambo knife. So what?)

All drawn from scratch (as you can probably tell). Feedback desired.”

— lucky760

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I'd suggest sinking the knife further in. Maybe bring a few of the flakes over the edges of the milk. As it is, it looks like the milk sits on top of a bowl of flakes.

by ReverendTed | 1 year 1 week ago | CH

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Thanks for the suggestions RT. I noticed that milk problem as well but had to wait until I got home from work to focus on the details.

I rammed the knife in a bit further as well.

That any better?

by lucky760

| 1 year 1 week ago | CH

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I was thinking what would be better would be a box of Cereal shot all to "heck" and empty shell casings everywhere. Cereal all over the place.... Or a frosted mini wheat (like from the commercials) hung from his arms, broken in half with Mini Wheat guts everywhere. (wow, that visual makes me wonder about myself)

by ScooterWerks

| 11 months 4 weeks ago | CH

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I like it, though I think it would be even better with the wording "Cereal Killer" on it.

by campionidelmondo | 10 months ago | CH

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Ideas: Put the knife in at an angle, jab it back out thru the side of the bowl. Splash some milk up on the blade. Get rid of the blood entirely. Make the splashes white (black outlines) so they're milk splashes. "Leak" milk out through the slash on the side. Penetrating trauma is so much more appalling.

by fyngyrz

| 9 months 3 weeks ago | CH

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