Good deal. Something else that's nagging at me is "Science" (at the very top) shouldn't be capitalized. It looks less like a true dictionary definition with the capital S.
if I were to change one thing it would be to change it from right justify to Full to get rid of the jagged edge. Ah, and you should capitalize Christian.
-Both good edits. I'll change it up tonight to reflect them.
I think it's a very good first effort that could be improved with these couple of tweaks perhaps: 1) Drop the "s" from Republican 2) Increase the size and make the title "Republican Health Care Plan" split across two lines, two words to each line 3) Make "Don't get sick" larger 4) Shrink "but if you do, die quickly" small and put it in parens 5) Drop "before bankruptcy" or shrink it even more than the "die quickly" line
This'd make it pretty solid methinks. And very topical; I'm surprised we don't have many (or any) other health care designs!
The font doesn't seem to fit, and maybe a little bit of size changing to heighten the punchline, (Make "But if you do" smaller, same with "(Before Bankruptcy)")
Also, the S on "Republican's" doesn't really need to be there.
Ah, and you should capitalize Christian.
-Both good edits. I'll change it up tonight to reflect them.
if I were to change one thing it would be to change it from right justify to Full to get rid of the jagged edge.
Totally agree with that.
Ah, and you should capitalize Christian.
1) Drop the "s" from Republican
2) Increase the size and make the title "Republican Health Care Plan" split across two lines, two words to each line
3) Make "Don't get sick" larger
4) Shrink "but if you do, die quickly" small and put it in parens
5) Drop "before bankruptcy" or shrink it even more than the "die quickly" line
This'd make it pretty solid methinks.
Also, the S on "Republican's" doesn't really need to be there.